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Selling a Script in the Real World

Tuesday, September 29th, 2009

There is one thing that will get your script noticed. It’s not fancy script covers. Artistic packaging. Tricks and nepotism. It is Good Commercially Viable Writing.

Good writing does not mean your script is commercial.  A good story doesn’t mean the writing in the script is good. Some writers trick themselves into believing the latter and the former. Thus they shoot themselves  and their career in the foot.

The story for “Black Lotus”  is compelling as I and the story creator envisioned it. But now that vision must be translated onto the written page. It must be deftly executed. Without that perfect execution onto the page how can we hope to sell this script? How can I leverage myself as being a studio-ready writer without a perfect example?

I delayed writing this script for two years because I was aware of the great divide between a good story and a great script. And the two are not mutually inclusive.

So, although I do LOVE the new script I’m working on, I realize that the storyTELLING must be better than or on par with the scripts out there in Hollywood land right now. It isn’t… not YET. :)

Couple things

Wednesday, September 23rd, 2009

Couple things to catch you up to what’s happening:

The do or die situation that most filmmakers and writer’s inexorably become faced with is upon me. My film, “Broken Hearts Club” will be screening for the folks at Central Europe HBO at MIPCOM. While this isn’t the only opportunity the film is presented with at MIP it is by far the best. Who doesn’t want to work with HBO?

If selected there’s a licensing fee. Paid to yours truly. Then the film gets split into six 20-minute episode and airs as a short series. The seventh episode would be a 2-hour recap of the story as a MOW (essentially the entire film).

Or, HBO just might want to go the MOW route and simply screen the film. Either way works for me.

Next up is “Black Lotus.” I have been on cruise control with this script since I started five days ago. As of this blog post I am at page 20. The treatment was so thoroughly completed by Nicole Sessions (who has a new Target commercial airing on TV) that I am not at a loss of story. In fact, the main concern at this point is fitting it all in. A nice problem to have.

Five Pages

Sunday, September 20th, 2009

I just added another 5 pages to the mix.

Writing a script five pages at a time is new to me. I’m usually in a desperate rush, trying to get to page 115 as quickly as possible. It is only then I that feel accomplished.

But this time I relish in every page and every sequence. I bask in the information I’ve included– in the most duplicitous manner, or course. I attaboy myself often for not rushing, for living the script as I write, for ushering it through the birthing process like a baby slowly making it way down the canal towards the light and welcoming hands.

Black Lotus is officially on its way :-)

Breaking Mental Boundaries with “Black Lotus”

Saturday, September 19th, 2009

Yesterday I jumped off Twitter at 11am. I was committed to writing the first three pages (intro) for the screenplayI’m working on, tentatively titled, “Black Mountain,” which I now refer to as “Black Lotus.” Black Lotus is an epic fantasy film. It’s “Lord of the Rings” meets “Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon.”

I’d been delaying the script for over two years. Fact is, I was afraid to write it. It is the single most ambitious screenplay I’ve ever attempted to write, and possible ever will. I was struggling with the opening sequence. For months I’d considered an opening like that of  “Lord of the Rings” where there is a brilliant narration over flashback action sequences. But that technique is overdone, overused and mostly ineffective. Then it occurred to me that the theme of the script was closer to “Gladiator” than it was to LOTR.

Gladiator is my favorite film of all time. The general who became a slave. The slave who became a gladiator. The gladiator who defied an emperor. The film has an amazing opening sequence full of visual content and context. We learn all about Maximus from his actions, not his exposition. We learn how great Maximus is through other people, not from him. It was a perfect example of how I needed to open this script.

With the new direction I set out to start the introduction. I figured three pages would help me get off to a solid start. I prayed it would work.

By 8pm I’d written not 3 pages, not 5 pages, but 10. In those ten pages I’d introduced the main theme, the protagonist, the antagonist, the mythology, the prophecy and the setting/time period. It was great. At some point in the future I am sure I will change somethings but for now it is exactly what I needed.

My goal is to have the first Act (30 pages) complete by October 30th — my daughter’s 10 birthday. I just might make it with room to spare.

(image from http://www.davingreenwell.com)

Welcome to “Black Mountain”

Tuesday, October 28th, 2008

BLACK MOUNTAIN – that’s my passion writing project right now. It’s the ONLY writing project I am super anxious to jump into. I’ve got quite a few in development but BLACK MOUNTAIN is the one that makes my heart go pitter, patter.

The only new film project I’m really interested in doing right now is a short based on a story I have in my head called MOONLIGHT PRODIGY. But that’s far off into the future :)

On to the BLACK MOUNTAIN…

It’s an epic love story with a classic “Romeo & Juliet” theme, but told through a unique setting and voice. The only thing I can liken it to is what Guillermo Del Toro did with Pan’s Labyrinth. When he married the horrors of war with a child’s fairytale he crossed borders and decimated barriers. That is what BLACK MOUNTAIN will do….if I write it right.

The script will be the very first script I’ve ever written that isn’t my story. The story was already well thought out before I got involved. My actress friend, Nicole (who now teaches yoga in LA) came to me years ago with the idea. When she told me she wanted to chat about writing a script based on an idea she had, I thought it was going to be a low budget character-driven indie film.

I read her treatment and immediately realized it was an epic story.

I strenuously encouraged her to work on the story and flesh out more details. After all, the more details she provided me with, the more of her original story/theme would remain in the final script. Scripts have a way of taking on a life of their own and I wanted to make sure I wrote her story not my interpretation of her story.

We brainstormed over a few months and each time I demanded more information, outlines, treatments etc, Nicole came through. That’s how I knew she was 100% serious. I’ve had people ask me to take a look at an idea for a story, but they can’t get themselves to write a simple treatment or synopsis.

Now we’re ready. I think I knew we were ready back in 2006 when I used to tell the story to my girls as a bedtime story. The story would literally take 30 minutes to tell, but my 6 and 5 year old’s (at the time) would remember character names, danger situations and plot points. I was astounded.

Now I’m adding BLACK MOUNTAIN visual aids to everything, my Myspace, my websites, my blog….everything. I’m going to be living and breathing this thing for months. Not to worry though; I’m still pitching and working on BROKEN HEARTS CLUB & THE WALL. And I’ll even be jumping on BAREFOOT ASSASSIN every now and then. But there’s an intricate story to be told in BLACK MOUNTAIN…

…and I aim to tell it in outstanding fashion.

Gone Baby, Gone

Saturday, August 9th, 2008

I’ve been away — so to speak — for a little while and the blogs have slipped by the wayside. In a nutshell I’ve been scrambling to complete Broken Hearts Club, or at least a very good close-to final cut. My composer delivered another version of a cue I needed for the BBQ scene and it was great. Just one more to go.

In the interim I’ve been trying my damnedest to equalize the sound before I jump into a rudimentary sound mix and sound design. Truthfully, my goal is just to keep the sound from sucking ass as much as possible. The sound for BHC really isn’t bad, not like in the old days of my first filmmaking endeavors, LOL. I did have challenges, like missing files from DAT tapes and bad on-set sound, but I’ve managed to edit my way around them.

I simply need to close this chapter and move on to the next. That means getting BHC out of its holding pattern and in a picture lock state (albeit temporary) so I can handle the other things I need to do. Like writing. It’s already August and I’ve only written one script this year. I need another one. But which? Black Mountain will take me months and months to complete a  very rough draft. The Wedding Conspiracy will take at least two months for a rough draft. However, I think the latter will be much more commercial coming out the gate with BHC

So, what’s with the title of this blog, Gone Baby, Gone?

Well, this is a twist on my goal of naming my blogs after film titles. Almost. I guess you can say this is a two part title-r. See, I watched Director Ben Affleck’s Gone Baby Gone last night and I have to say it was the most completely entertaining, well-written, well-acted, well-directed film I’ve scene in a decade.  I am going to add it to my DVD library.

The film is near perfect. The storytelling and the characters are so authentic it’s almost surreal. And the core theme of the story, the dichotomy of right vs right (there’s no misspelling there!) is impeccably approached without preachiness. In fact, at the end, while there are two seemingly “right” choices it was hard for me to speak out against or for the lead actor’s final decision.  It made me think.  If you want to see a good film, a really good film, Gone Baby Gone is a must. Rent it.

Now onto the second part of this blog. Lately I’ve felt like I’ve been spinning my wheels burning the candle at both ends and in the middle. There’s been very little structure to the things I’ve done. I’ve tackled this project, then that one, then the other one. As I get closer to the early bird submission deadline for Sundance I need more structure and focus in my activities.  I need to create a measurable plan so I can go back and look at my results and see if I truly got the entire job done, not just pieces of the project.

I’ve abandoned my plan of embargoing BHC and instead I am going to spread it out far and wide. I’m going to start with sending copies to several critics and then move on to talent agencies. I’ve got a little buzz project for Sundance and Slamdance too, which are the next two über-important film festivals coming up. While Slamdance is technically harder to get into because of its limited screenings the film festival rivals Sundance in its ability to get filmmakers seen and sold. Summarily, I need to be able to check my results at the end of each month and see measurable progress. 

To ensure this progress I need to compose a very thorough “to do” list. I’m working on it this weekend. Early next week I expect to receive three books I ordered about film financing, distribution and film business plans. These books should help me get a handle on marketing and distribution processes for BHC and pre-production financing solicitations for my other film, The Wall.  

When I get all these things into place, complacency will be gone baby, gone, replaced by a definitive plan to get me from the D-list to the A-list.

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